PHIEND - Stay Fresh (Prod by. J Rocc)

Phiend- Stay Fresh

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Lyrics:

Yo, I stay fresh like im out of the package.
Im a grown boy, home boy, this flow aint ya average.
And this rhyme scemes unique, my style and physic,
Im bringing the heat wit me, like your stuck in a tree.
And yea ill Chop It Down, Choppa Down like im French,
But then ill Roll It Up, Rollin' Up like im Wiz.
Im thinking is their any room for little 'ol me.
Cuz man we're all the same, except that im a PHIEND.

But, then i stay fresh, Damn im so Fresh.
This music brings checks, and all you niggas deaf.
But, then i stay fresh, Damn im so Fresh.
This music brings checks, and all you niggas deaf.
Its either Go Hard, or Go Home. And let this music waves hit the Ozone.
Cuz this old school hip hop man, Its so grown.
They say im hot wit it, but im so cold, yo.

Spittin over compositions, this is my mission,
No fee for admission, just raw beats and your vision.
Im rockin back like im RETRO, im so "Casette old".
Bumping Heavy metal, with a side of 'De La Soul'.
Im so unstoppable, but im unprepared.
My mind takes me places, I dont wanna go there~
And ill put up my middle finger and let it cosign.
Cuz my rap lines are worth more than Whitney's coke lines.


Appreciate all feedback, will rtf. Good looks!

feedback-
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showpost...40&postcount=6
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I'm feelin the intro sample & the beat. The thing that makes this song sound terrible is not the verse.
It's the sound quality.
I listened to the whole song tho cause I heard worse before. Not a bad drop, just get the static removed and you're working with something.

I'll be around to hear more.

RTF:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...709/index.html

Yea, man. I think its my mic. Do you have any recommendations?

will rtf

cool beat , def needa new mic.....flow was pretty decent, delivery could be upped...lyrics were a bit simple but i felt agai nwoulda hit better with better quality/delivery...keep em coming

Beat real old school vibe I love
DOn't like the quality what are you recording on it really spoils the track to enjoy with the mixdown
It starts really nice then throughout the track then kind of goes in and out of sloppiness
Lyrically very clever
a little more energy in delivery

refeed
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...912/index.html

hitting you back

damn quality is horrible lol but yeah get a new mic asap if you can and if u take music serious....flow is ok a bit shaky at times...real hard to listen to this with the quality...generic lyrics you def got potential though delivery ain't bad swag is decent too

def get a new mic u got potential man for real

hit me back on another track of mine please
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...492/index.html