spit for rank

wat up new to this site so, i really dnt know were to introduce myself at or were u text for rank at so ima drop something in here to get ranked, thats even if yall rank ppl, but anyway feed back either positive or negative is appreciated.

Project's Angle

Im stereotipically insained and outta my membrane
Bread to slang cocain and to feel no pain
Talk about the dope game and wear flashy thangs
Not go to school, and drop out after the 9th grade
I disrespect women, callin em hoes and bitches
Dnt trust the police, and to murder and rape snitches
Pull pistols out, livet, cock and bust with slight decesion
Bottles crakin, over dey head, so now they need stiches
Uneduacated i dimistrated, with my words, im pressed
No route navigated, but i try to do my best
Real, gangsta's dnt walk around with teflon vests
Cause they life span is short, takin 2 to the chest
Tattooed out the ass, reppin city and hood
Outsiders say im thugish, and im doin no good
I make my projects proud, raise ur head like u should
Most talented, and intellegent, if only they could
Judging me is a mistake, from beginning to end
Didint drop out, get arested, but i lost some friends
Now im sittin at the top, lookin dwn on them
This is are time projects, so let our story begin

please give feed back
thanx

Nice first drop man. Very good flow imo, and I like the ending where it turns out your not fronting like your a gangster. I thought the first 2 lines were really tight, but the third one was stretched to me. I liked the rest of it, and definitely can't wait to read some more of this.

RTF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...594/index.html

A lot of played content, the whole hoes guns things only works well with other new concepts..esp wordplay ;)

e.g ..I burn cee's, It's your turn b..Raise it a degree or two..
Strapped wit gats, blaze your corpse till it become ashes like pikachu..

Stay up..