Keystyle - Land On Your Level?

It’s so dramatic, yes! The most fanatic vet
Those I battle suffer from post-traumatic stress
Automatic-direst teach the 7 levels of the rawness
Then bury them so deep they meet up on a plesiosaurus
My speech is enormous; it reaches the chorus
At a speed unachieved by a meteor falling
With the features of Argus! Please leave in a coffin!
I’m a savage phenomenon, unraveling homonymn
Traveling ominously to ravage and bomb you all
I lavish in saunas long as I ravish your mom and aunt
My dick is up all night like it’s having insomnia
It’s ridiculous alright, I haven’t had a condom on
So I’m face-fucking them till I disfigure their jaw-lines
A meticulous war-type, spitting to scorch mics
Turn the stage that I’m on into a bombsite
My scriptures are raw, right? Wicked but godlike
I write till my wrist has stiffened from lost life
Then breaks the fuck off like it was stricken with frostbite
My text is fatal... check the labels of the headless angels
I’m known to drop the best emcees like record labels
Step to blaze with weapons waving. Yes! I’m hateful
When I hover over tracks like magnetic trains do
Who do you expect to save you? God, the devil, the hardest rebel
All of the above and all who your squadron revel?
None can fuck with me! My thoughts are dreadful
And if I fall off I’ll just land on your level!

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this aint a keystyle. it's too good to be one. you might have keyed it up but i know you edited it a lot. admit it bitch

shit was fire dude

It’s so dramatic, yes! The most fanatic vet
Those I battle suffer from post-traumatic stress
Automatic-direst teach the 7 levels of the rawness
Then bury them so deep they meet up on a plesiosaurus
My speech is enormous; it reaches the chorus
At a speed unachieved by a meteor falling

sick imagery!!!
ps. the fuck is a plesiosaurus?

sick flow son

It’s so dramatic, yes! The most fanatic vet
Those I battle suffer from post-traumatic stress
Automatic-direst teach the 7 levels of the rawness
Then bury them so deep they meet up on a plesiosaurus
My speech is enormous; it reaches the chorus
At a speed unachieved by a meteor falling

crazy imagery!!! had to look that lizard up!!!

my bad, didnt know it posted twice. I thought it didnt post cuz the page fucked up so I re posted.

UPP

dope shit, I don't know why lyrical shit like this gets slept on. it had too many quotables to point 'em all out, but...

"I lavish in saunas long as I ravish your mom and aunt
My dick is up all night like it’s having insomnia"

^haha that line was funny as hell, stay at it.

Fazet its a Dinosaur!

I thought that this was a very nice drop but I have to agree with Para and say that this isnt a keystyle. I have been around for awhile and read a bunch of shit but the was thought out. It doesnt make you look like any less of a writer if you dont keystyle everything. Overall I thought that this was a good drop it had a very good flow and some very nice original concepts. So of your syllable counts were off in your rhyme scheme but you know that already

mad ill evey aspect was on point structure wordplay lines fillers hits i have to admit this was starit fire kid

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It’s so dramatic, yes! The most fanatic vet
Those I battle suffer from post-traumatic stress
Automatic-direst teach the 7 levels of the rawness
Then bury them so deep they meet up on a plesiosaurus
My speech is enormous; it reaches the chorus
At a speed unachieved by a meteor falling
With the features of Argus! Please leave in a coffin!
I’m a savage phenomenon, unraveling homonymn
Traveling ominously to ravage and bomb you all
I lavish in saunas long as I ravish your mom and aunt
My dick is up all night like it’s having insomnia
It’s ridiculous alright, I haven’t had a condom on
So I’m face-fucking them till I disfigure their jaw-lines
A meticulous war-type, spitting to scorch mics
Turn the stage that I’m on into a bombsite
My scriptures are raw, right? Wicked but godlike
I write till my wrist has stiffened from lost life
Then breaks the fuck off like it was stricken with frostbite
My text is fatal... check the labels of the headless angels
I’m known to drop the best emcees like record labels
Step to blaze with weapons waving. Yes! I’m hateful
When I hover over tracks like magnetic trains do
Who do you expect to save you? God, the devil, the hardest rebel
All of the above and all who your squadron revel?
None can fuck with me! My thoughts are dreadful
And if I fall off I’ll just land on your level!

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WELL I FIND IT SAD IHAVE TO QUOte UR WHOLE FUCIN DROP CAUSE THERE NOTHING ELSE TO SAY...... every line from top to bottom WAS FIRE... READ BETWEEN THE RED LINES and ur see wat imean


i cant even break the sht down..lost for wordds



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YOU HAVE YET TO SEE CRAZY

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BITERRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^
is this true?

lol....well

It’s so dramatic, yes! The most fanatic vet
Those I battle suffer from post-traumatic stress

7th Crescent
O.M. Champ

wherever and whoever you are, thats a dope line...lol