Fading Away (w/Hook)

Sat down today, started workin away and this is what I got.
I'm pretty happy with the outcome of this one. Give it a listen and lemme know what you guys think. Instrumental of the month! lol

This instrumental was sampled from:

Artist: Ugress
Song: The Beauty Never Lasts

-The hooks lyrics are as follows-

"Be quiet dive in the moment
Blue faced disguise
Searching her eyes
Fighting like a
Night on a clear day
Floating away fading away"

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i love this, got a painful/realness vibe to it

somebody could write to this talking about their life.. almost a triumph type beat.

pc man keep elevating

really like inspirational type beat with a good vybe just spittin the truth or something

bump, Lets get some more comments peeps!

hot beat, got a really nice vibe to it. Deep emotion requires strong lyricism and deep delivery. very hot.

This is ill. Chorus fits the beat most definitely. Im diggin this track man, the sample is very well executed. Good job man, and if you dont mind RTF:http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...779/index.html

Loved this mate.

I could tell from the intro it would be good. Nice and clear, boom bap soulful style at its best. If I would change one thing, then I guess it would be the snare it just kind of snapped.

Sorry, I'm not the best at explaining things. No hate though, I really enjoyed hearing it. The bass, kicks, everything was so sublime.

9/10 :)

Great vibe for those real poetic artists, def. like the vibe on this one, did its job really. good ish man. keep it up.

Nice emotional beat, the sample was great. I wish the sample (vocals) was a little louder tho... Since it's a sample, you might not have full control on it in the mix, but maybe the drums could be lowered a little then (especially the snare). Anyways, great work, keep it up!

@Atomic - Yea I really dont have much control of the vocal sample on this, the best I could do is filter out a double take on it, but even then it really messes with the overall mix.